Somber Icy Spectacle

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    Somber Icy Spectacle

     Dark and Deep
    Darker and Deeper
    Immersed am I in these waters.

    I see no light
    For there is no light
    That extends to the waters I drift.

    You know the sting of frost you feel when the wind has pinned your warmth?

    I live in that cold.
    I breathe in that ice.
    Trillions of stings make my skin,
    But somehow is does not define me.
    I follow through with the prickly sheets
    that beat the sands against themselves.
    Though existing within tsunamis of cold
    they do not engulf me and pass.
    I fall behind the waves forsaken,
    Distilled from their momentum.
    The frost bites me once more.

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    LiveLoveLaugh commented on Somber Icy Spectacle

    01-03-2010

    "i live in that cold, i breath in that ice" i love that part
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    SecretAngel3

    01/03/2010

    I love that there is a line you love enough to quote =D

    LiveLoveLaugh

    01/03/2010

    PFFT! i love ALL your lines! this one's just fun to quote :D it seems so deep and romantic in a way "i live in that cold, i breath in that ice" ahhh love it! :D

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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