Temptation

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    Temptation
    There’s always the temptation to want something you can’t have
    Being in a relationship is like caging a wild animal
    It’s not fair
    Its not right
    Tying down a beautiful dove never letting it go into flight
    How do you try to be free when there’s always someone trying to tie you down
    Loving is great but it wont last if it’s not true
    It’s not good
    It’s not bad
    To think there might be something else I could have had
    This could be a passing phase or just the urge for temptation
    It’s not the worse
    It’s not the best
    Look around, I’m not strong like all the rest

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    Wakeitha commented on Temptation

    06-17-2009

    Excellent poem, I love the style of it. Made me felt like I was there. I needed that poem on today because I tell lgod I need him because I'm not strong. He stated, to me I'm your rock and your strength.
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    laydbak1 commented on Temptation

    06-10-2009

    Every love is about the level of commitment given it, born of and defined by, the strength of our belief in holding to someone we truly think is worthy of us... It could happen that it works out, but to me... starting off undecided about it is never a good premise to begin with... a good write though...
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