Flower

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    Flower

    In a field
    I am a flower
    A flower that stands out among all the others
    I’m the wild flower that no one gives a chance
    I’m the flower that bloomed unlike all the rest
    Water I plentiful
    But I as the flower
    Get barely enough to go on
    Wind torments me with its powering breeze
    I stay strong for my roots are mounted with certainty
    The cry of a wildflower goes unheard
    You’ll know when life has been distilled from the flower
    It will begin to lose color
    Its beauty will crumble inside and no longer shed externally
    The petals will become weak and fragile
    Her roots will no longer live to yearn
    Yet, there is still beauty in this dead flower
    It’s just a matter of somebody noticing her inside beauty
    Look beyond what you actually see
    The mirror image is nothing in reality

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    Chrisjan commented on Flower

    05-30-2009

    A very realistically creative poem. To bring focus on Gods' beautiful craftsmanship, on the outside. Yet, remaining "focused", even on the inner beauty, that still remains. Thanks for sharing.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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