SUICIDE PG-13

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    SUICIDE PG-13
    the girl with the mousey hair
    taunts a young boy with inviting stares
    leading him on just for kicks
    was her favorite trick
    it filled his young life with despair

    the teacher her breath reeks of booze
    she force feeds him yesterday's news
    learn or you'll burn
    she bellows so stern
    then she beats him with the golden rule

    his parents have given up hope
    the peer pressures the parties the dope
    they wouldn't understand
    now his blood's on their hands
    and he's at the end of his rope

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    PoetsofBlood commented on SUICIDE PG-13

    10-17-2009

    Unfortunaltly Monkntz, this is a big reality, you hit a nerve here, good write...
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    monkyntz

    10/17/2009

    thank you very much for your comment

    Nadia1986 commented on SUICIDE PG-13

    07-13-2009

    So sad but I would never want to blame another person for someones death cause I try myself not to think that I caused my mom to kill herself. I do however get what your saying that it got to be to much for the boy so all in all it was a good poem because in truth that sadly happens to people a lot.
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    Writer1 commented on SUICIDE PG-13

    05-27-2009

    Truly insightful. Limericks are not easy, either. Good job. I'm now officially a FAN! Your experience in writing poetry is show, BTW. :)
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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