ADDICTICTED

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    ADDICTICTED
    i don't know how long i've been addicted
    or how long i have to get it straight
    and how much have i been missing
    just because i couldn't wait

    i've stood alone among the millions
    i've loved and lost a time or two
    chouces made became a prison
    time is lost but always due

    mighty walls and bits and pieces
    all crumble into the mix
    open windows, drugs and jesus
    last resorts or an easy fix

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    lois2lane245 commented on ADDICTICTED

    06-08-2009

    great poem i have read a few of yours they have quite different meanings very good simple and to the point i like it no betting around the bush keep up the good work
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    Writer1 commented on ADDICTICTED

    05-27-2009

    OK...this is SO rateable! Kind of a "been there, done that" thing. And I honestly got goosebumps. I'll continue reading more of your poetry. I expect it will speak to me. :)
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    FiloRozzell commented on ADDICTICTED

    04-29-2009

    A very tricky place to be for sure. Good job...I understand that place it was not cool..
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    blu commented on ADDICTICTED

    04-29-2009

    Perfect!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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