Sometimes

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  • Sadness

    Sometimes
    Sometimes I just want to stop feeling
    sometimes I want the world to stop spinning,
    with so much going through my head
    wishing some way I could stop it instead,

    tears keep pouring from my eyes
    so many questions, and doubt inside,
    wanting to finally be happy
    wanting to just be me,

    To not hide what I'm going through
    to not be afraid to do the things I want to do,
    I just want to break free
    but its never that easy,

    My fears make me doubt everything
    sometimes end something before it has a beginning,
    sometimes I want to just stop hiding
    and to finally stop crying.

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    kingone43 commented on Sometimes

    08-14-2009

    Very Nice Work. I Enjoied It . K ind Of Sad Thought. I Hope That This Is Just A Poem, And Not Takin' From Real Life. For That Would Makes This Poem Just That Much Sader.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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