Silence

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    Silence

    Silence scares me
    Too quiet to move for the fear of disturbing
    the serene quietude
    Silence settles in the air like sweltering
    heat on a toasty summer day
    It surrounds me, and I am caught in it
    Afraid to leave it
    tangled in a sheet of silence
    and unable to remove myself from
    its stalwart arms I give in
    give in to silence.

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    BCP commented on Silence

    12-15-2008

    I like the poem,great description of a woman caught in fear. condensce some of your words and use give only once. great poem.
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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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