Silence

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    Silence


    Silence scares me
    Too quiet to move for the fear of disturbing
    the serene quietude
    Silence settles in the air like sweltering
    heat on a toasty summer day
    It surrounds me, and I am caught in it
    Afraid to leave it
    tangled in a sheet of silence
    and unable to remove myself from
    its stalwart arms I give in
    give in to silence.

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    BCP commented on Silence

    12-15-2008

    I like the poem,great description of a woman caught in fear. condensce some of your words and use give only once. great poem.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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