Chance

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  • Lost Love

    Chance

    To AM.G
    I miss my chance to be with u
    I lied to myself
    i lied to my heart
    your all i ever wanted yet
    u confuss me worse then anyone i know
    babe your all i ever wanted

    But i'm not your thing
    so know all i can do is be there for you
    I never said those four letter words
    that could have made a difference in how this all turned out

    But whatever happens baby
    i will always love u
    just think i crazy for u
    some think it's funny but it's how i feel
    I loved u from the first day i met you

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    Margot commented on Chance

    09-05-2009

    very good writing it sounds like u have loved and lost alot like me
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    BCP commented on Chance

    12-15-2008

    read this poema again and revise it, it good but to wordy, use three or four stanza lines. keep writing, you will be a good writer.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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