Forgive me:

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    Forgive me:
    To Tabitha Allen
    Honey just tell what to do,
    Baby i know i made a big mistake,
    Sweetheart please forgive your all i want,
    your all i need to live,

    Baby Girl i'm beggin you
    please don't leave me
    I'm so so so so Sorry
    i never ment to hurt you,
    Honey i will do anything you want me to.

    Sweetheart i never changed my mind
    i still want to marry you and be yours.
    I Love You,I'm so sorry.

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    BCP commented on Forgive me:

    12-15-2008

    revise this one as it sounds like a letter or prose. if you use three stanza's or four stay all the way through the poem with those number of lines.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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