Passion

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Passion

Don't sweep me off of my feet because

I might fall in love with you.

Your exotic eyes and soft lips, sweetness that

lies within your stare. Consciously touches my soul.

Look at me, I'm trembling, as you whisper in my ear,

"I'm beautiful to you." You caress my hair with

your gentle fingers, slowly touching my back.

I'm nervous. I've been touched and moved

in a manner so deeply loved. It's more than intimacy,

it's love between a man and a woman.

You remove my blouse, my eyes are teary,

I became sad, I inherently start to cry.

Tears of passion that faithfully control my body.

You are allowing me to feel you, Fate.

I feel alive. Am I dreaming you?

Your delicate touch, soft skin, intriguing eyes.

Am I starting to love you? My shyness emotion,

dangerous notation, eagerness being.

I'm not who I am, I am who I'm not.

I feel your love in me . . . and want more.

 

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knight4696 commented on Passion

04-05-2010

Marmor - A very romantic and sensual write indeed! ;) Nothing beter than true love, is there? :) Ken

Marmorl73

04/06/2010

Ken, I agree with you. :-) Thanks!

blueberry commented on Passion

04-02-2010

Such a lovely poem you created. The words are so alluring. Good one!

Marmorl73

04/02/2010

Thanks so much. I appreciate it! :-)

HarverTomsson commented on Passion

04-01-2010

You have a lot going on here. But the most telling is the line, "I'm not who I am, I am who I'm not." For a guy, the most important reaction is when the buttons over your heart get opened, and sadness is what emerges first. Is that because you've traded sex without getting love once too many times? As passion, this poem clicks; as erotic, it emits a more muffled note. As a picture of what goes on behind closed doors, the lens is still out of focus. But maybe that's what you intended.

Marmorl73

04/02/2010

Yeah you are right with this poem has a lot going on here. I am referring to passion and passion only. Basically this poem was written about a man I was falling in love with knowing in the end of the relationship it wasn't going to be more than waht it was. I intended for it to be complex and confusing and yet speak of passion that will be just that passion without love. Thanks so much for your comment.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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