Melt My Heart

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Melt My Heart

Your eyes melt my heart and astonishes my soul.

Hopes for many tomorrows, love that never grows old.

I believe in love, I believe in us.

Lips against lips,

Your fingertips pressed firmly upon my skin.

An open book of integrity, pages you let me read.

Tell me,

Your deepest thoughts and secrets

Only you and I would know.

Let me,

Into the world you live in,

Feel what you feel, live what you lived.

For what our love has become,

I hold close to my heart.

Even when times are hard and we are far apart.

I imagine your eyes, the blue and brown texture,

with a slight glaze of clearness,

like an ocean filled with endless life.

Fulfills the tranquility of knowing you love

and adore me, patiently, forevermore.

 

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SavVySam commented on Melt My Heart

04-18-2010

So many lines of loving beauty written within this lovely piece! Very nice!

Marmorl73

04/19/2010

Thanks for your comment!

Stryx commented on Melt My Heart

04-10-2010

I can tell you are a romantic. What else are you? I will have to read more.

Marmorl73

04/11/2010

Actually love poems are my hardest to write. But Thanks for allowing me to see that I can be a romantic.

Teardrops commented on Melt My Heart

04-07-2010

This poem is really good and remember nothing can stop love nothing thanks Marie

Marmorl73

04/07/2010

Thanks so much! I agree with you! :-)

knight4696 commented on Melt My Heart

04-05-2010

Wow Marmor! Very nicely written and I can so relate! :) Distance sucks .... But true love can endure! Great job! :) Ken

Marmorl73

04/06/2010

Thank you so much! :-)

Marmorl73 commented on Melt My Heart

04-02-2010

A typical love poem but with strong imagery.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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