Blank

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    Blank

    Non-pictures of distant memories
    Vague images of years gone by,
    Scripted of writing on paper within time.

    For I am stronger then
    the little girl I once was.

    Words I cannot take back
    But only hold with me.

    Confused
    Entangled
    Like a renamed sentence,
    Read unclear.

    But purposely complex
    My life knew.

    That my blank page
    Is now written upon.

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    RHPeat commented on Blank

    01-10-2011

    I really don't think that the first 3 lines are needed for this poem's intent. They are just flowery words which the poem ends up restating anyway. A very power little poem about life's mark being made upon us as we live it. That's a fantastic statement that begins with: (I am stronger then the little girl I once was.) and then ends with: (That my blank page Is now written upon.) what more does the poem really need? A very poignant work. I love it. A poet friend// RH Peat
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    Marmorl73

    01/10/2011

    Thank you for your comment. Also, relooking at it I kind of agree with you in regards to the first 3 lines. Thanks again.... :-)

    RHPeat

    01/10/2011

    Mar/ it is a dynamite little poem that says a lot about just living life. And taking what it offers as you go. I love it. Thanx for sharing it. It says: get through the trauma and find the laughter in the cherished moment. A poet friend// RH Peat

    Marmorl73

    01/11/2011

    Thanks again! I appreciate it. :-)

    kdarcy commented on Blank

    12-13-2010

    Nice write, each line made me phase a moment to fully take a picture with me to the next verse, well done k
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    Marmorl73

    12/13/2010

    Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :-)

    soulwriter commented on Blank

    11-30-2010

    Beautiful and full of poetry - I admire the way this flows and takes the reader along the growth process... never losing it's innocence. 10 Soul
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    Marmorl73

    11/30/2010

    Thanks! I appreciate your comment. :-)

    Chaos128 commented on Blank

    10-28-2010

    Comparing who you are now, to who you were then, is a strange process. Sometimes you can't even reconcile how the one became the other. You've conveyed the feeling well.
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    Marmorl73

    10/28/2010

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem. :-)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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