Our Life Together

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    Our Life Together


    I wake up to find you sleep,
    Covered by sheets, except pedicured feet
    I think to myself, how life is sweet
    Because you’re my wife and life is a treat
    I kiss your forehead, and then you smile
    But you stay asleep at least for a while
    I quietly leave to make your meal,
    A wonderful breakfast to me a big deal
    I get the plates and cups to serve,
    Showing my wife all she deserves
    Thinking of you, words are never lost
    Little one asks to help, I tell him of course
    Making breakfast for mom, as best we can
    No menu for this, not according to plan
    All finished up and ready to feed
    Another smile from you is all I need
    You wake up and smile, and ask if it’s true
    Our life is special, because of my days with you.

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    Charlie23 commented on Our Life Together

    09-01-2009

    An amazing poem for your amazing love! This is a beautiful writing!

    BrooklynsOwn

    09/01/2009

    Yeah I was in a deep love when I wrote that one. Thank you for reading and commenting

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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