Not a Good Night

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Inspired by the Dylan Thomas poem ‘Do Not Go Gentle Into That Goodnight’

Not a Good Night

We’ve heard much of lighted tunnels

Welcoming arms reach from the past

Into oblivion our sand funnels

Until peacefully we breathe our last

 

That’s not the way I plan to leave

Giving my soul without a fight

I’ll cling desperate to this mortal sleeve

My last will not be a good night

 

Old age flickers like a candle

And glorious deeds in shadows lie

Dying tears are hard to handle

a final question whispered, “Why?”

 

Before I run down the curtain

I’ll give that bucket a mighty kick

Though my demise is all but certain

I won’t go quietly or quick

 

Like sheep led to the slaughter

Their eyes blank with empty stares

Passively becoming fodder

Stripped easily of all their wares

 

While some may suffer accident

That makes their heart contrite

I won’t suddenly become penitent

My last will not be a good night

 

Soon the boatman will be beckoning

And death will finally have success

But it will be a bitter reckoning

I’ll not go peacefully to my rest

 

Copyright ©2007 Anthony Hall

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lightcourier commented on Not a Good Night

06-29-2009

If we could all keep the mental focus of our youth the fight would be grand! lol Another excellent read. Twinges of wry humor and resolute determination. Thanks!

HarverTomsson commented on Not a Good Night

06-29-2009

Your poem flashes sparks of cynicism and comraderie with life. You'll be up to the task of glorious deeds in shadows when your time comes. All because you have no answer to the question of "What then?" after the curtain falls.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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