mutual thing

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    mutual thing

     So this is a mutual thing
    I like you and you like me
    I feel a real connection
    Can't you see
    This mutual feeling I will forever treasure
    You and Me her together
    I'm so happy light as a feather
    I believe these feelings we have are the same
    There's a certain connection between us two
    You stand up for me
    And I for you
    We have  been friends forever
    I have loved you from the start and to the end
    If I ask you and you say no
    My heart will never mend
    I believe this feeling we share
    I hope this wont be just a fling
    You and I love each other
    We share this mutual thing

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    CDWillams commented on mutual thing

    10-04-2010

    I like this, it touches the heart, makes you think hard. Keep up the good work.
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    jesterescapade commented on mutual thing

    03-13-2010

    Nice feeling and good flow. A poem such as this can touch the soul
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    sk8ergirl commented on mutual thing

    12-20-2009

    that is a great poem i wish i can write like you when i am 15 great write
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    rougepriest commented on mutual thing

    12-13-2009

    Hi at 15 trust me kid its a fling in the sense it cant last. use metaphors to explain instead of obvious description, like instead of saying "I believe these feelings we have are the same" make it like--Our feelings reflect like 2 opposing mirrors ever seeing each-other the same" or some such but the idea is to compare things to explain morning breath like cheese feet like giraffe, tounge like a pregnant cow, dress like a ghetto felon, zits like papa murphys deluxe pizza, see keep adding it up to a good line before ya know it ya have a poem!
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    jj1562

    12/13/2009

    thanks for the advice funny zits ike pizza

    Emy717 commented on mutual thing

    12-13-2009

    cool i realy like the way you put things i mean this is how most relations start not from a glance but from a freandship.
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