Loss of Desire

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    Loss of Desire

     

    Blocked from the sun
    Held back in the shadows, in pain.
    Stifling…
    Wishing only to see light
    To smell the clean cool air of fantasy-
    But being locked tragically in reality 

    No longer waking with the lingering joy of dreams
    Bright scenes of a better existence-

    Their absent. 

    Replaced with different versions of the same truth
    Not brighter or darker
    Just different shades of the same

    Was happiness a memory or an illusion
    A want….a desperate desire
    Manifesting into a living dream
    Then turning to the darkest of nightmares.
    Haunting an already tortured existence. 

    Is it the defeat of ones aspirations?
    Or merely the acceptance of true reality.

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    FranzJ commented on Loss of Desire

    01-02-2012

    I like the last line - reality - what is it really - all in eac our owns' preception - very thought provoking

    Artie commented on Loss of Desire

    09-13-2009

    I can really relate to this. Sometimes we spend so much time and energy focusd on things that seem important, yet they do nothing for the soul. Then one day we turn around, and the light has faded, leaving emptiness. We feel stagnant and life seems bland. 10 from me.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Harsh reality 1
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    Kiss Off! 1
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    Loss of Desire 2