INSIDE

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IF A PERSON HAS NOTHING INSIDE ,IT DOESN'T MATTER WHAT THE OUTSIDE IS

INSIDE

INSIDE

 

A BODY THAT NOURISHES

AND ALWAYS HYDRATES

INFLUENCING THE SURVIVAL

CREATING A LIVING BEING

 AS A HEART PUMPS THE PURITY

AS THE PURITY CREATES THE SOUL

AND THE SOUL OPENS THE MIND

ENGAGING AS A WHOLE

EVERYTHING ELSE WITHIN THIS BODY

FILTERS AND DISPOSES

ALL JUST AS IMPORTANT

BUT IS NOT WHATS THE RIGHTEOUS BEING

YET ALSO A WHOLE

A BODY ON THE OUTSIDE

ALSO MUST BE NOURISHED

AND CLEANSED

FOR ITS APPEAL

ALSO GIVES MUCH MORE TO OUR BODY

FOR IT GIVES US OUR BEAUTY

AND OUR EYES ALWAYS FORGIVING

YET THE OUTSIDE IS INSIGNIFICANT

NOTHING MORE THAN A SHELL

WHILE INSIDE SHOWS AND TELLS

GIVING MOST OF WHAT OUR BODY NEEDS 

 

                   Joseph A DeVoe

                   8/12/09

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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