INSIDE YOU

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    READ AND SEE FOR YOURSELF,SEE WHAT YOU FEEL, DOES THE WATER COME TO MIND

    INSIDE YOU

    INSIDE YOU

     

    I THIRST YOU

    JUST TO HAVE YOU

    AGAIN AND AGAIN

    I SEEK YOU LIKE WATER

    ANYTIME I CAN

    ONLY TO HAVE YOU

    OVER AND OVER

    I BEG TO HEAR YOU

    JUST TO HEAR YOU COO

    IF ONLY I HAD YOU

    WE WOULD DO THE THINGS WE DO

    FATHOMING MIXING OUR WATERS

    AS WE BEGIN TO WOO

    NOW THAT I HAVE YOU

    I NEED TO BE INSDE YOU

    SO WE WILL BLEND AS ONE

    I’M FEELING THE JUICES

    THE WATERS

    NINETY EIGHT PERCENT IS US, IT’S TRUE

    NOW DEEP INSIDE YOU

    I CLIMAX

    FEELING THE WETNESS

    GROWING WIYH THE PASSION

    AS WE ARE BURSTING

    AND BURSTING

    ALL COMING, ALLWATER

    SO NOW IS THE HEW

     

    Joseph A DeVoe

                                                                  8/15/09

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    badwan commented on INSIDE YOU

    09-02-2009

    love is the master mixer, mixing hearts,minds, souls, breath and blood, that if it s a true love, i mean when two means one.
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    heartmindsoul

    09/02/2009

    thank you for taking the time to do this read,what you wrote was poetry its self

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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