HATE

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    • lisy14u2c
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    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this poem being pissed one day.reflecting back on my both the loss of my mother and father and I usually say the word hate allot. I feel it is a very strong word but didnt notice "HOW STRONG" it was until I read it and realized I how often I say that word. When I repeated it so many times at the end of my poem. I didn't like it at all. It gave me a reality check and I will try to not say that word as much as I do. What an ugly word!
    Lissette

    HATE

    Let me cry how I feel.
    Let me waste my presious tears.
    Let me scream a screatching sound,
    Make my house shake off the ground.

    Let me get angry, when I get pissed,
    Throw a glass and have a fit.
    Let me release this inner me,
    That destroys my sanity.

    Let me punch out walls of stone,
    Let my heart break off the core.
    Let me spit on every grave,
    let me hate the human race.

    In my deepest place of pain,
    In my head no end to rain.
    In my sorrow and dispair,
    This is what i do to make you stare.

    Im calling out  in different ways.
    I just may need your help today.
    So in  my anger, I call out and say.

    I HATE, I HATE, I HATE, I HATE !!!!!!


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    redbloodink commented on HATE

    06-07-2010

    wOw .... I hope you have found love in your life..... I feel your pain I've lost most of my family not just from death..... but because I have choose to be the real me..... born a boy I live as the lil girl I have always felt I have been.......... I hope you take the time to read a few of my writes......... ty for sharing you .............. red

    lisy14u2c

    06/09/2010

    hi my friend, Yes! Ive always have had love but inside I was not very happy with myself..Wrote this poem I think on a very bad day..Feeling much better... A loss of any sort that hurts your soul, your well being ,your life is very hard.. I've also have cut my losses with other things other than death,, Sometimes we have to give up a little to get back more.. Hope your well and keep in touch..

    Necy commented on HATE

    12-05-2009

    Yes Lissette, unleash it all , and its acceptable in a poetic accursed. Good write!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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