OH! THESE CHAINS..

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Poem for my beautiful mother Virginia Torres.

OH! THESE CHAINS..

Held down by chains of steel
and armor made of stone.
My heart engraved of sorrow
It's felt deep in my bones.
I grieve when I remember. I cry an endless sea.
The tremors in my hands cant hide, The pain endured in me.

Wallow upon a bed of nails and cover eyes that cry.
Walking on fire everyday, It feels since you have died.

In this hell on earth I live today, my dear since you first left,
The image of your face so ill, I never will forget.

To save you was my mission, my soul I would have gave,
To stand and fight for you to live, how I prayed for you to stay.

But the book of life was written, engraved in that same stone,
That armor I have carried, has withered my poor soul.

I'm still fighting with this armor, I still drag these chains of steel
but what really keeps me going is my lord, with faith he heals.
Thank You Lord!

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slimgoodwoody commented on OH! THESE CHAINS..

12-11-2011

What an excellent piece!! It tugged at my heart with a feeling of helplessness. I really enjoyed this.

lisy14u2c

12/12/2011

Thanks for your positive comment... I am humbled...:))

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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