The Silent Mind

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    The Silent Mind

    Silently I stumble amongst my own two feet,
    Blaming an opposite party,

    Silently I breathe so I won't be heard,
    Silently I cry I only reveal to the lords.

    Silently I fight with the demonds in my head,
    Telling me it's not better,
    To be living then be dead.

    Silently I wait, sinking in my mind,
    And hoping it will end in a short matter of time.

    I am dead to me, outside, I believe,
    And I'll be silent, again,
    Where I know that I should be.

    L.T.G. ( 2009)

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    Qualin commented on The Silent Mind

    11-27-2009

    STILL I WONDER DEATH,DEMONS,DESPIRE,WHOA'S,JUST DOEST FIT YOU...ALTHOUGH THEY ARE VERY WELL WRITTEN....HOPING YOU WILL NOT END IN A SHORT MATTER OF TIME!!! QUALIN

    boomboom56 commented on The Silent Mind

    09-10-2009

    Strong words. The sadness is overpowering. You describe such a lost soul, but an intelligent one. Good stuff. Thank you for sharing your heart with others.

    Panaramicpoet commented on The Silent Mind

    05-21-2009

    Its very nice. I really like how you put it together. Just Keep up the good work. Maybe you can read some of mine and tell me if they are ok. Have a wonderful day. . . Robert :)

    WordSlinger commented on The Silent Mind

    05-14-2009

    Very original, and loud, A big 10

    WordSlinger commented on The Silent Mind

    05-14-2009

    Very original, and loud, A big 10

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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