CAPTIVATED

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    • lisy14u2c
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    9AM SUNRISE SUNNY ISLES BEACH CAPTIVATED ME ... TOOK PICTURES AND I WAS IN HEAVEN OF THE BEAUTY OF THIS WORLD.... STRIKING. I PAUSED FOR ONE MINUTE OF MY BUSY DAY AND NOTICED THE NATURAL BEAUTY OF OUR EARTH.

    CAPTIVATED

    SKY SO HEAVELY SPRIRITUAL & BRIGHT,
    WATERS CASCADE THEIR RESIGNATING LIGHT.
    APPEARS AS NEW IN EACH WAKING DAY.
    CAPTURES MY SOUL,TAKES MY BREATH AWAY.
    THE EXPERIENCE TO VEW THE WONDERS OF THE WORLD,
    & GASP IN AWW, IN MY STUMBLED WORDS.
    IM CAPTIVATED BY YOU, AS I START TO THINK,
    ASTOUND BY YOUR BEAUTY, NOT WANTING TO BLINK.
    & THROUGH THE LENS I STRATERGIZE.
    IF ITS ALL REAL, TO MY DECIEVING EYES.
    PATIENTLY CAPTURING, THIS MOMENT IN TIME,
    THIS SPLENDID EARTH IS ALL OF MINE.
    LISSETTE GONZALEZ.

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    UnoMono commented on CAPTIVATED

    03-03-2010

    How much we tend not to respect and appreciate the natural beauty of the world...Days like the one your captured both in words and picture is the asset of world we inhabit...

    lisy14u2c

    03/03/2010

    thanks so much for those words i truly agree....

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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