The Woman I Remain

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    The Woman I Remain

    I live lost, my eyes have died.
    I speak silently, nothing resounds,
    I stand alone, in the corruption of life,
    A woman of steal , I remain I am a mother and a wife.

    I breathe deeply, thee pollution of the world,
    and cry silently as I wonder off to sleep,
    A woman of coarse, I remain, for the sanity in me.

    I am lost, I am hurt, I am drwning in this sea
    An endless desperation of a mother who has passed,
    but a woman I remain, for the sake of all who need me.


    In me a reflection of her I am,
    Grounded with roots of steel,

    In her name, in her honor, in her spirit,
    With GOD I Pray I'll heal.

    L.T.G ( 2007)

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    redbloodink commented on The Woman I Remain

    06-10-2010

    This poem is a treasure of art....... I found blessings in these words.......... One of these is the one who wrote it....... red

    kdavidscott1 commented on The Woman I Remain

    05-28-2009

    I love this poem - the woman you remain as God brought you to life - a mother to your children a beautiful wife. Your mother would be happy to know you are well - smiling in heaven if she's passed on to dwell. Life's full of corruption so God sent you to earth - to keep corruption from reaching the child you gave birth. The woman you remain my poetical queen - is to make the world better and that's by all means... Much love your brother in Christ, KD

    WordSlinger commented on The Woman I Remain

    05-14-2009

    Very good write, I like how it all begins and ends, :)

    Phoenix9 commented on The Woman I Remain

    05-14-2009

    losing some one is never easy.good write indeed

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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