8 1/2 month (haiku)

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    8 1/2 month (haiku)
    pickles are calling
    stop laughing at me, mister
    can't get off sofa

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    poetheart87 commented on 8 1/2 month (haiku)

    11-18-2009

    Pregnancy I'm guessing. I don't get haikus, but this is funny. I've been there, where all you want it seems is pickles and oh yeah, that trying to pull yourself off the sofa while everyone laughs and just watches, oh it brings back memories. And you put it so perfectly in so little words, congrats!
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    mmichelle97219

    11/18/2009

    thank you

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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