33 Chilean Miners

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A true story of the recent chile miners, it did take 33 days to drill the hole 2000 ft, and they were rescued on 10-13-10, this poem is a tribute to them and story that changed the world to a better place.

33 Chilean Miners


33 miners of copper and gold
A story always to be told

17 days of only night did anyone know our plight?

Deep  under ground 2041 ft
 almost straight down and not a bit of sound

How could we defeat 93 degrees of heat?

Dissipating hope how could we cope?

400 horrible, horrendous dark hours
 We thought
 too deep to push up the flowers

On the 17th day
Although we thought it was night
A long awaited "6 in." hole Drilled through to our site

Nerves tapping, hearts pounding Did they die?
 Or could they be alive

The world standing by

"THEIR ALL ALIVE"

The longest to survive in history
 Soon to be a movie, not a mystery

How did they survive?
could we rescue them alive?

52 more days as in hell a story they lived to tell

Anxiously awaiting to see Children and wifes
 they would take the ride of their lifes

In a rocket type cage one by one they were lifted 
through a man size hole, as if with special powers
 they reached Ground zero in a ¼  hour

 

69 nights, seemed no days
 weaned on our sanity
 but not all in vanity

It took 33 days to drill the 2000 ft hole

 Remember Jesus died at 33

And on 10-13-10 which = 33

Love was not mis-directed when 33 men were resurrected !

                                                                                                                      Rich-Severson 10-14-10

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Olan01 commented on 33 Chilean Miners

12-28-2010

I am happy to see another poet writing about this event. You have done this quite well. I also wrote a poem about it you might like to read, entitle Camp Hope, Earth. http://www.originalpoetry.com/home/poems/view/title/c-hope-earth It is not because it needs more press but because for a moment in time, the entire world was united to save 33 souls. Love, peac and freedom, Olan

Mareann commented on 33 Chilean Miners

12-26-2010

It's all part of the bigger plan... Gos knows what He is doing, Amen to the miners all being rescued safely! Thank you for this wonderful poem,,, Blessings, Mary

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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