--Linda--

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    Linda, Im  sorry ! i was just a boy.

    --Linda--

     You bargained friendship
    I agreed, knowing you was
    about to enter courtship

    You was quiet, shy
    i knew i was the right guy

    The other was still there
    she had me by a hair !

    But you had me by my heart
    Oh... how i longed when we was apart

    Two lovers, I did not love them the same
    I guess I'm guilty of playing a game

    You found out
    I spoke out loud
    Red faced, blood boils, purple head
    Guilty as hell, it began to swell

    all negotiations toward
    The penetration

    Linda, i did`nt know, that i abused !
    I was so confused

    The last time i remember you
    Colorful dress, it was the carress

    Your luscious lips, your hands on my hips
    I moved below and tasted ever so slow

    You moved, you cringed, 
    We were truly hinged

    I was your first, you should
     Have been my last

    If by chance you have no romance
    and still care, i have my prayer

    Time has gone, dont sing that song

    Linda I`m on my knees
    Memories, memories, memories



     



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    papapaczki commented on --Linda--

    06-19-2009

    Good use of words on the rymes. Feels like a letter to Linda, I think you captured the point of trying to send a message to her. Good work on this.
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    nmedina commented on --Linda--

    06-18-2009

    Oh my.......very nice, felt that nudge on my rib cage again. Very sad though, you didn't end up with Linda.
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    Richisfun

    06/21/2009

    Thanks, i did have her for 10 years tho, memories are great too, lol

    LIFEWILL commented on --Linda--

    06-18-2009

    wow yeah i like it, you kind-of went to left field near the end, with the whole tasted her thing but it was good.
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    Richisfun

    06/21/2009

    Hehe ! left field, I try to center it nxt time, thanks

    PunkCutie commented on --Linda--

    06-17-2009

    wow, you wrote it so well like i've been in the situation where my bf loved me but liked sum other chick and wow..i like this.very nice
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    BDIsernhagen commented on --Linda--

    06-16-2009

    wow..poingant, really. terrible wonderful. Yeats was right, we poets must pain and toil the most for our art.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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