Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

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This poem was written a few days before christmas and given to my freind  who had a baby , who looked like an angel but was always sad.

Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

In the mist of mess, a child was born
A child of hope,  of love, and of joy !

In the mist of mess, a young angel lives
with the beauty of an angel but also the sadness
of despair

She does not know that it takes the mess to make her grow

In the mist of mess  she must grow
she knows that it takes 2 to tangle and
being single she must mingle, those are her words

Mingle with sadness
Mingle with selfishness
Mingle with lies and deciet
It would all be a bad reciept !

In the mist of mess  she can find rest
Its her choice rest or more mess

Her choice of hope, love and joy
Or lies, doubt and deceit

In the mist of mess  there is in the air
" Despair" that inner confusion, disillusions,
 Illusions of grandeur  and an un-quieted mind

In the mist of mess  there is also tranquility,
Integrity,honesty,loyalty and all without hostility

since it takes 2 to tangle, love begets love
Misery find company and an angel waits for what ?

In the mist of mess there is always 2 like the father and the son
The sun and the heat, the giver and the reciever

In the mist of mess will the one rise or fall ?

May love surround her togive her a fighting chance !

May joy fill her heart and let her know the right choice is not the lying friuts of deciet  but of honesty

Let love  fill her heart  with joy and be thankful always.

Tis-the season for joy !

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photochick commented on Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

07-02-2009

wow that was great i love the flow of your words and the message and I felt every word and emotion I have been in a mess a lot in my life and understand you must have the mess to get the good love the poem keep writing you are very talented i am sure the person you gave this to was very touched

PunkCutie commented on Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

06-15-2009

i like this, it was really good, i like how its dedicated towards a friend,great poem, nicely done!!

passionsdance commented on Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

06-07-2009

In the midst of a mess I found my words. It was that mess that built my armor and yes veracity was sweeter than the lies and wonton ways of the stormy petrels that surounded me . Good work

snowdove commented on Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

06-04-2009

wow, im speachless, great work, this really makes you think, i have been there before my friend i have felt these emotions and more. you really put it into perspective. another great work.. keep up the good work!!

jenifer commented on Christ-Mas --- girl with baby

06-04-2009

a little to repetative , but its good. write more . keep up the good work. blessings to the christmas baby.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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