E-Motion

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    The cosmoligical constant is Gods good energy !

    E-Motion

    Mix energy with motion
    and watch the concoction

    Energy + Motion
    Could cause convulsions

    Mix good with bad
    And you might be sad

    Gradualness with passion
    is surely the session

    Anger is a sign of danger
    Where love is from above

    Wasted energy is a
    Drain on the battery

    Distractions subtract
    Where attractions add

    Stay focused on one thing
    And make sure its a good thing

    Energy mixed with a bad thought 
    is an emotion of doubt

    Energy mixed with a good thought
    Is an emotion of sprout

    So don`t sprout the doubt !

    Einstein was about E = MC  squared
    but i say  E  +  M  =  are you having a good day?

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    etheraledict commented on E-Motion

    06-17-2009

    wow Richi, like i said the other day this one got me off the couch feeling electrified now thanks just the spark i was looking for inspiration at its finest great job love it
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    Mangus commented on E-Motion

    06-17-2009

    Quite a different sort of piece. Light, but with a good amount depth. It seems to e some unspoken wisdom here. Nice write
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    Richisfun

    06/17/2009

    Its deeper than meets the eye, This is how it gets inside of you, read then dream about it.

    PunkCutie commented on E-Motion

    06-15-2009

    lol i like that last line, very original by the way, it was enjoyable to read.i also liked the ryhming =]
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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