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The story of us all, unloved because of lust.

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A child  arrived
With love in her eyes

With 2 good parents by her side ?

Daddy bankrupted, no divine
Mother searching, never to find

Lovers who should have never been
Was the child of sin ?

Parents mistakes
How much can a child take

Leaving father and mother
And the so called lovers

Needs never met
She is dark from
Sunrise to sunset

Lovers and lovers
never finding love
Under the covers

If daddy would have known
Love from the start
She could have been spared
The horrible part

Daddys sexuality started  with
Mommy, and ended with me

The girl with beautiful pearl
Paid the price when mommy`s
Love did not suffice !

Life revealed to me
The secret sin always
Had the truth within

I think it is a must
That life should not be
Lived only through Lust

God`s tender mercy showed me
forgiveness is from above

The suffering i feel, i feel no more

I do fight and feel sorry for
 those Who know not right

The train im on is on the right
track, no looking back

Daddy is still not just and
Being held with charges of lust.

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Swann commented on ----De-Railed---

06-18-2009

You have terrific flow. The poem read very smooth. The message is very powerful and you express it well. Great poem.

SilverGirl commented on ----De-Railed---

06-17-2009

Wow. there is a very powerful message in this poem.. I see the pain.. and the wonder.. and the what ifs...It makes a person think.. and think is what we should do.. Great job. hugs. SilverGirl

Richisfun

06/21/2009

Silver, love yr comments, are u sure yr hitched? lol

Mangus commented on ----De-Railed---

06-17-2009

An emotional charged piece that speaks to the drama which is all to common backdrop of today. It point out several questions that we should ourselves. Masterfully done.

BDIsernhagen commented on ----De-Railed---

06-16-2009

wow. This goes beyond the love v. lust fight, to expand on the unwilling victims: a very effective way of looking at it. thanks for the recomendation!

Jes commented on ----De-Railed---

06-16-2009

Very true I've had some experience with both but a lesson is learnt. I like the poem deep sad torn feelings Jes

Richisfun

06/16/2009

Thank you, i hope it touches you

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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