Your Favorite Color

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    Written December 15, 2008

    Your Favorite Color

    I have never seen my heart
    Crumble the way it has,
    The way it's succumbed to
    The loss of your smile.

    Yet it faintly remembers the sound
    Of your voice,
    Or the length of your stride,
    But it burns as it pumps -
    That which is reminiscent of
    Your favorite color.

    If God is present in the wind, then
    There you might be in the base of a rose.
    There you might be in an infant's cheek.
    Though I am not fit for the lowest of things,
    I long for your love to inhabit my soul
    Then it might glow darker than the angry sun.

    I can't remember how you said my name
    But I cringe at the sight of your favorite color
    That which resides in and through my veins
    And I pray that I won't bleed tonight.

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    Bonofied commented on Your Favorite Color

    03-20-2009

    of course i love it it was written on my bday and red is my favorite color

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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