Let You Go

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    Written January 28, 2009

    Let You Go

    I've made my peace
    With the non-existance of forever
    My friend, you were, but not anymore.
    It was not enough, all this love
    That I once carried -
    Now a burden high on my shoulders.
    Please lie to me
    Say you never wanted me!
    So that I can let you go!

    Why did you hold me like I was yours
    A daughter, I wasn't meant to be
    I swear, I swear I would have called you
    Mother.
    But you're no better than a bad memory
    Can I scream the hate I breathe?
    Though the hate is no bigger than a lie.
    But I know that you can lie to me!
    Please say you never wanted me!
    So that I can let you go!

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    nakedtruth43 commented on Let You Go

    03-14-2009

    This is really moving.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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