I Love You

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    Written October 30, 2008

    I Love You

    Eyes I have never seen,
    And hands I have yet to feel.
    But your name rests in the veins of my heart,
    And I love you!

    The lines in your face made by
    My Imagination, that dreams
    Of a future serenaded by your cry.
    But you're so close! So close!
    I can hear you breathe!
    And Oh My God! How I love you!

    Though God has yet to breathe life
    Into your tiny form
    You are a life, full of life, in the back
    Of my mind...
    So I'll wait with your name in the veins
    Of my heart
    For the day when I say, "I love you!"

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    BigDaddyCash commented on I Love You

    11-08-2009

    Poetic elegance, good luck on that fruitful day. LOL, BDC

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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