I Love You

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    Written October 30, 2008

    I Love You

    Eyes I have never seen,
    And hands I have yet to feel.
    But your name rests in the veins of my heart,
    And I love you!

    The lines in your face made by
    My Imagination, that dreams
    Of a future serenaded by your cry.
    But you're so close! So close!
    I can hear you breathe!
    And Oh My God! How I love you!

    Though God has yet to breathe life
    Into your tiny form
    You are a life, full of life, in the back
    Of my mind...
    So I'll wait with your name in the veins
    Of my heart
    For the day when I say, "I love you!"

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    BigDaddyCash commented on I Love You

    11-08-2009

    Poetic elegance, good luck on that fruitful day. LOL, BDC

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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