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    You

    I'll buy you a star,
    Name it whatever you want.
    The universe is yours,
    And all that's in it.
    Babe don't ask me how I feel about you,
    'Cause the answer will stay the same.
    I'll give you a dozen real roses,
    And one fake one,
    With a promise that says;
    "I'll love you till the last one dies."
    Don't tell me the sky's the limit,
    Because even the Galixy can't contain it all.
    No task is too small,
    No feat too big.
    Babe it's all the same,
    As long as you're here.
    When you're gone from my sight,
    The world still turns,
    The sun still shines,
    The flowers  still bloom,
    The grass still grows,
    The day goes on.
    But I don't notice the beauty in it.
    When I'm walking with you;
    The  world turns slower,
    The sun shines brighter,
    The flowers shimmer and shine,
    The grass grows greener,
    And the day is beyyer.
    Nature's beauty is n o match for you.
    When I'm around you,
    My heart races;
    Like the hoofbeats of the wild mustangs.
    E verytime I think of your smile,
    I get butterflies.
    There are no bars,
    Or locks at all.
    An open heart,
    And loving hands,
    Is what we share.

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    Satinna commented on You

    09-12-2009

    I enjoy reading this poem lovely words and it had a great ending. It reminds me of my poem "Wanna be Yours". You can check it out if you want at the following web address: http://www.originalpoetry.com/wanna-be-yours

    Kdaddy commented on You

    09-07-2009

    A beautiful poem from the heart of a lover. I enjoyed reading this one.

    lunamarie commented on You

    09-07-2009

    a very sweet love letter -- I liked it a lot ... what about the moon?? ... (smile) ... Luna

    graceladymn commented on You

    09-07-2009

    Such a gentle, compassionate, deep love where two are equals and there are no paths are barred from either, this then the upcoming form of sharing life as partners, I hope that many couples find a way to make it through the fires of test that life will bring for when the core of relationship is benevolent friendship, passion knows no bounds.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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