Scars

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Scars

People all around you,
Have to stop and stare.
Some will even wonder,
How those scars got there.
I have scars too,
Except mine aren't hard to hide.
See yours are on your skin,
Mine are deep inside,
So cut up and torn.
It's not because of sickness,
Or because of third degree burns.
Mine are from the past.
So dark and not well seen.
I don't have anymore nightmares,
In fact, I don't even dream.
I'm so torn apart,
Broken up and hurt.
My life has not been pleasant.
I've been tossed and thrown in dirt.
The people I have trust the most,
Have broken me and lied.
I don't have bestfriends anymore.
She had to go and die.
When I do the right thing wrong,
My life goes round and round.
When I wake up the next morning,
I'm lying on the ground.
My heart is somewhat broken,
I suffer from great pain.
Some people stop and wonder,
Is that girl insane?
Though people try to help me,
Mend my broken heart
I'm starting to get better,
But they'll never fill the part.
The part that's dark and empty.
Gloomy and Ice cold.
I'm hoping I'll get better,
Or so I have been told.
You and I aren't different,
You suffer, so do I.
We both have lost a great ammount,
We both sit alone and cry.
People all around you,
Have to stop and stare.
Some will even wonder,
How those scars got there.

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musicbox commented on Scars

10-14-2009

you are a really great writer. all your poems read so well, and your emotion jumps out of the page and grabs hold of the reader and doesn't let go till the poem ends. liked your poems, i really identified with this one in particular. great job.

Gabriel85 commented on Scars

07-02-2009

You have a unique style, and an eye for realistic imagery. I'm sorry life has been so hard on you. I've lost close friends too. You can be such a force for good having lived through these things, to help others that have the same problems. Keep turning the darkness into light with your poetry. The line about not having nightmares because you don't dream at all was very touching to me by the way.

JadedJezzabel commented on Scars

06-26-2009

emotionally naked real and truly from your heart......you write very well. I know its easy for me to say but i come from a long hard rode i never thought i would live this long, so belive me when i tell you.....your only 17 believe in the good in yourself and life will get easier with time.

gypsyf8 commented on Scars

06-25-2009

excellent!!! hauntingly familiar - i enjoy your writes very much and can relate to many

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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