Without Mommy...

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  • Love And Loss

    Poem Commentary

    There's so many things people hear bout in this world. Not many taking the time to see it through those that are hurtings veiw. And as I sit down one day thinking bout all the different people deal with when having a loved one in the military it got me thinking... Then next thing I knew I had sereval poems wrote... Here is one of them....

    Without Mommy...

     She slides on her uniform,
    packs her bags. As she put
    her bags in the car, her
    husband carries their 6 month
    baby girl to the car. Holding
    her husbands hand as they
    head to the base. She looks
    in the backseat and then
    back at her husband. Over
    and over again she tells
    them both, that she will be
    home and that everything
    is going to be okay. She
    kisses them both goodbye,
    as tears fall from her eyes.
    As months go by she writes
    and calls as much as she can.
    Now her husband gets letter,
    but not from her. Now, she's
    coming home to be laid to
    rest. Her husband of 3 years
    get to carry on with life with
    their 10 month baby girl, but
    with a big hole. Cause it's all
    without mommy.

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    Teardrops commented on Without Mommy...

    12-06-2009

    wonderful poem wirttern about a painful subjest , You do our woman in the service justice thanks for the read
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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