Whispered Promises
Promises whisperedwith roses of red
wither and die
leaving naught
but dried up
petals of hope
and piercing
thorns of despair.
--- Jaycee
Whispered Promises
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with roses of red
wither and die
leaving naught
but dried up
petals of hope
and piercing
thorns of despair.
--- Jaycee
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EyesOfRain commented on Whispered Promises
08-20-2012
- This made me sad. The brevity of the poem drives the point home even harder. Great job.
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