Whispered Promises

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    Whispered Promises

     Promises whispered
    with roses of red
    wither and die
    leaving naught
    but dried up
    petals of hope
    and piercing
    thorns of despair.

                      ---  Jaycee

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    EyesOfRain commented on Whispered Promises

    08-20-2012

    This made me sad. The brevity of the poem drives the point home even harder. Great job.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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