Foolishness
Changedin an
instant
of awareness;
the cruelty
of its creation
scorned
her youthful body
and bridal innocence
was ripped away
to reveal
the foolishness
in believing
that love
would be enough.
--- Jaycee
Foolishness
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Tags: Wedding Night
in an
instant
of awareness;
the cruelty
of its creation
scorned
her youthful body
and bridal innocence
was ripped away
to reveal
the foolishness
in believing
that love
would be enough.
--- Jaycee
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laydbak1 commented on Foolishness
07-28-2009
- Sometimes, we just have to call it like it is; an odd human behavior... That we sacrifice our common sense for sake of a hopeful love, or the wantonness of lust itself is the burden of delusion virtually every human being suffers from occasionally... As reality slowly begins to set in after the new has worn off, the first person we feel like slapping for our mistake is not someone else, but us... Such fools we can sometimes be... Great, short write....
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07/28/2009
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