When I'm gone

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    When I'm gone

    When I'm gone,
    will you still remember me?
    When I'm gone,
    will you still call out my name?
    My days are numbered,
    but still I pray,
    you will remember me,
    When I'm gone.

    When I'm gone,
    will you remember
    the times we shared?
    When I'm gone,
    will you remember
    all the laughs we had?
    Maybe you will,
    When I'm gone.

    So alone I feel,
    now that my brother is gone.
    So alone I feel,
    now that my mother is gone.
    Please tell me,
    when I'm gone,
    you will never feel alone.
    I will be here,
    right by your side.
    All you have to do,
    is remember me,
    When I'm gone.

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    simplypeace commented on When I'm gone

    04-04-2009

    this is so sad but so very touching. very beautiful.

    organicchick commented on When I'm gone

    04-02-2009

    You will be remembered for the emotion shared in your words at the very least!! This a very touching poem..it is going in my favorites.

    aimhighnow commented on When I'm gone

    03-27-2009

    Kind of Sad, but enlightening. I like it

    fennesse commented on When I'm gone

    03-27-2009

    I will, Mis P that touched my heart I want you to know that I'm happy to have met you on this site. your work is getting better and better Ps.we won't cry right!?

    AIXA commented on When I'm gone

    03-26-2009

    Made me sad, but opened my heart

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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