What Do You See?

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  • Life
    • supermancdr
    • is at the point of a writters block...aaahhhh so frustrating

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    Everyone has a story and I believe that the only real truth lies within someones eyes

    What Do You See?

    What do you see when you look into my eyes
    An innocient child sitting in a field catching fire flies
    The perfect childrens doll that everyone always buys
    A child sitting in a dark room silented by mutated cries
    My body like a zombie roaming where the dead lies
    The number one person who tells you when everyone dies
    What exactly do you see when you look into my eyes?

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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