Death By Birth Given

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    This poem was written for the same little boy that "My Son" was written about. This little boy had the world at his feet but was cut down by a mother that thought she controlled the whole world...I love you Duane aka D.J

    Death By Birth Given

     A cruel and unusual punishment to something so pure
    Something so small, so inocient, so immedeitly sure
    A mind so angelic and a body so small
    Is that what an individual has to go through to prove to
      them all?
    A religion, a topic, a lesson to learn
    With a life so limited, a great one has to uren
    Why must his life be made so hard to bare
    A misarable sit in the cornor, so many lessons we share
    So much unlearned and so much one fights to see
    A mythological being is this childs dream to be
    A child with this life deserve death none the other
    Or should we consider this being the death by his mother

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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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