Im Sorry

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  • is at the point of a writters block...aaahhhh so frustrating

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This poem was written when I was placed in West Oaks Hospital. I had been running away from home and really bad in to drugs and drinking. I only thought about myself and never thought how my actions hurt the people who loved and cared for me. I wanted to say sorry and make up for the things I did and said and this is what came out.

Im Sorry

Im sorry for all the times I lost my temper
For the times when I was rude
For all the gifts that were given   
And never recieved thank you's
For all the love you given me
And I haven't given back
For all the times you were patient
A virtue that I lack
Im sorry for all the people
To whom I was so cruel
To all the people I laughed at
I acted like a fool
I couldn't see past my imperfections
I couldn't see past my pride
Your feelings I trampled all over
On my high horse I would ride
Im sorry for all the times I lied
For the people I hurt along the way
Not a day goes by that I don't regret it
And i'll take it back anyday
The only person i cared about
Was me and only me
And now im truly sorry
I only wish I could make you see
Im sorry for everything i've done
For all the people I let down
Im only asking for a second chance
So I can turn things back around
I know that it's a little late
My deeds can't be undone
I realize now that I was wrong
And im sorry everyone

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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