Dear God

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I wrote this when I had alot of things going on that i didn't understand. I needed answers, so i wrote something that i never thought i would. A letter to God

Dear God

Dear God,
Its me agian, the one who barely talks
Im here wanting to scream how hard it is to walk
Walk in a world where every turn i make seems wrong
Wondering why life is a mystic unknown song
Why does the devil tempt us with objects so evil
Sowing our lives together with tanted yarn and an infected
                                needle
Why are we cursed with mind altering drugs
Why do kids feel the only thing to do is turn into thugs
Why is this world a circle of lies and deception
With humans as manikins trying to make a connection
Why do parents seperate and toss their kids around
Why do people get killed with only few body parts found
Why God? Why? I scream to the sky above
Why in this world is there more hate then love
Why do you inflict pain on us if you love us so much
You said we'd be protected, but your people are dying at a
                                 touch
Why did you create love if you knew it would hurt
Why is love good when it has put your children in the dirt
Why must there be an option for most humans to fail
Why is there only a mere optical allusion for a real place like
                                  hell
Why God, why can't you just see
That your perfect plan failed
Sincerly, Me

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rachelleann28 commented on Dear God

09-07-2009

Sometimes I have thought about those questions..but I have to just keep reminding myself that God says everything happens for a reason and it does!!! God wouldn't put us through so much pain if he didnt know we would be able to handle it and get through it!! Of course the pain is always gonna be there, but just remember so will God. Just hang in there..things will get better I promise!!!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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