Weatherman

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    Poem Commentary

    Into every life some rain will fall. The good ones persevere through it all.

    Weatherman

    Weatherman

    The forecasted storms,
     for this season is the norm
    but my life’s in no need of the rain.

    Once the storms come around,
    only hurt can be found
    and I don’t want to deal with the pain.

    I’ve been at the axis,
    the eye of the storm
     and though it is quiet and calm

    I know that for certain, 
    the weather will worsen,
    as the eye moves further along.

    Also, true in the end,
    is it gets better my friend,
    once the rest of the storm has gone past.

    So, though I’ve been battered
    and my world has been shattered,
     there is sun in my future forecasts.

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    slimgoodwoody commented on Weatherman

    02-08-2013

    Loved the flow and the rhythm of this poem. Rarely does someone not sacrifice form for function or vice cersa but you my freind have done it well, here!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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