My Tongue

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My Tongue

My tongue, it longs to please you, to taste your hidden treasure/
It yearns to dance along your flesh and bring orgasmic pleasure/
My eyes bore deeply into your soul, as I look at your beautiful face/
My lips touch yours, so plump and full, our tongues hungrily embrace/
I kiss you on the nape of your neck ,the taste there is warm and sweet/
I breathe deeply from the cup on your body where your neck and shoulders meet/
My tongue begins to trace your body, every inch of your heavenly flesh/
My tongue licks, quickly, a hardening nipple, my mouth engulfs your breast/
My tongue begins to follow your stomach, as your body begins to reel/
I kiss, wantonly, on the sides of your hips, as the anticipation builds/
My mouth enjoys your succulent thighs so warm and ready to please/
I begin to part these delicious treats by pushing the inside of your knees/
I lap, doggedly, at your inner thighs, the beast, from its cage, has been sprung/ 
Then I lift your ass, suddenly, to explore that sweet P*$$Y and once again, I begin, with.......MY TONGUE!



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MarionYost commented on My Tongue

05-22-2010

Very nice piece of erotica, Vivid imagery. Nice job. All the best -Marion-

phatdaddee

05/27/2010

Thanks again maiden Marion, I appreciate every time you drop in and peruse what I have to offer here!!

JamilahAyanna commented on My Tongue

05-03-2010

definitely lovin whurr dis poem takes da reader. Lots of vivid images come to mind and I loved dis....very hott yet professionally done, check out Foreplay on my page.....u might find some interest in it...

phatdaddee

05/03/2010

I already read it and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Brought a very warm feeling to my...........heart! Thanks again for reading, I appreciate the feedback!

JamilahAyanna

05/04/2010

Anytyme...

honeybun80 commented on My Tongue

08-23-2009

Wow This is definetly hott...From One erotic poet to another Im lovin this shit..Good Job Luv

phatdaddee

08/25/2009

I knew you would love this one you little perv!! HA HA HA!!! thanks for enjoying my tongue! I aim to please! :-)

GucciGurl commented on My Tongue

08-07-2009

Damn Dammmmmmmmmmn. This is hot ! Got me all bother thinkin bout this and seein my boo soon. One good thing after another.

nmedina commented on My Tongue

07-15-2009

Oh wow!!!! Damn......this was hecka nice to read and in someway dream to. Very well written and full of good feeling.....LOL

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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