Touch Me!

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    Touch Me!

    Please, touch me! Let me feel the fiery tentacles of
    electricity your fingertips send across every synapse
    In my central nervous system.
    Please, tease me! The rake of your teeth against the
    nape of my neck, not enough to cause pain but enough
    to send the comet of anticipation hurtling towards the
    Gravitational pull of my own ecstasy.
    Please, hold me! Like a child holds it's teddy bear
    when the monsters won't stay under the bed or like a
    mom does her newborn baby, tenderly, lovingly, knowing
    that no matter what happens you will never really want
    to let go ever again.
    Please, feel me! Feel my body pass over yours like the
    moon does the sun during that perfect moment when all
    things align and a solar eclipse occurs, cloaking the
    world in darkness just long enough for you to PLEASE,
    touch me, tease me, hold me, feel me, all over again!

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    BreeLove commented on Touch Me!

    01-05-2011

    Mmmmmm ..... u definitely know how to create an image inside ones head!

    phatdaddee

    01/06/2011

    I might rent a space there someday but I heard it can get strange there! Lol! Love the use of the m's though, that's hot!

    DeniseCarol37 commented on Touch Me!

    09-13-2010

    Good erotic, touching without being sleazy. Imaginative short poem.

    phatdaddee

    09/15/2010

    Thank you! I just want to warn you that I do have a more direct (sleazy) poem on this site!

    MsKrystle commented on Touch Me!

    09-15-2009

    I like. So are we going toe to toe with our erotic poems? Is that why you suggested this one? I do have one brewing, not finished yet. It wont be too erotic, just enough to make you say "damn". Stay tuned

    phatdaddee

    09/16/2009

    I would not dream of going toe to toe with you your HIGHNESS! I am but a mere mortal who bows down at the feet of royalty!

    GucciGurl commented on Touch Me!

    08-07-2009

    You are such a great writter! I love your work. You say sum of the things i want to say so much. Cant wait to keep readin

    RyneishaB commented on Touch Me!

    07-14-2009

    Wow...this poem took me to another place...very well said...your style is one of a kind :) Great Write!!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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