UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

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    UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

     U used by her to extract orgasmic delight
    N never thought of til the middle of the night
    M manly enough to quench all earthly desires
    A anxiously awating for our next tryst to transpire
    S sexuality is his middle name
    K kept around only to fan her flame
    E excitedly awaiting her to stroke the keys
    D deprived and disrespected yet willing to please

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    10-23-2010

    I really love your originality. Thanks for sharing your gift. It is truly unique...................E
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    phatdaddee

    10/25/2010

    Gift is questionable but I am always willing to share! I thank you for your honesty and acceptance!

    LesserPwn commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    10-06-2009

    I'm def. liking this piece, it has such a different feel than a lot of poems
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    phatdaddee

    10/07/2009

    Thank you sir, it was inspired by a fellow poet.

    JadedJezzabel commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    09-15-2009

    ahhhhh baby...... i didn't know it was like that. i'm going to p.m. u
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    jademelissa74 commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    09-07-2009

    NIcely crafted. Richly poetic and gravitating! It reels in the reader and maintains a level of interest. Great piece!
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    phatdaddee

    09/15/2009

    Thank you so much for your honest opinion, at least I hope its honest! Seriously, thanks for the comment!

    dahlusion commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    08-21-2009

    Brilliant in its creative design, poetic flow, and metaphorical phrasings. A real gem!
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    phatdaddee

    08/25/2009

    I pale in comparison to some of the masterful poems you've posted DAHL but that just makes me appreciate the feedback even more.Thanx!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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