Time

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this poem is about my struggle moving on after the person i truly liked left.

Time

Time and time again I thought he was the one. When he laughed, i laughed. His smile could light up my darkest nightmare. His emerald green eyes cheered me up when I was down and felt alone. Now, he has moved on. Forgoten me. I am just a memory in the darkest corners of my mind. He said that time would heal this hurt. As time goes on, that part of my heart that belonged to him will grow weak with pain and time will just make matters worse. In time i will see him again, but he will have moved on. He and time are the same. Always looking forward, never back at the good times. As I swim in the never ending ocean that is my sadness I wait for the day when I will see him again to tell him time doesn't heal all wounds. Some can only be healed by those they truly love.

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shortie commented on Time

06-04-2009

that is so true hun.... u should listen to the song "hey stephen" by taylor swift. its so perfect for this kinda stuff.. idk if u like counrty tho.. i dont rele but this is a good song.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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