Over it

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    Over it
    What was i thinking? He could never be the right one for me. I'm shy, he never cares about the clothes he wears.
    I hoped and i prayed, but no luck ever comes to those who wait. Now i, now i need to see the bright side of things. This will never hold me down. I am free to fly all around the world. I just have one thing to say. I'm over it.
    He doesn't know. I see him everyday, and he never talks about me. I take a deap breath and i say.
    I hoped and i prayed, but no luck ever comes to those who wait.Now i, now i have to see the bright side of things. this will never hold me down. I'm free to fly all around the world. I just have one thing to say. I'm over it.
    SO OVER IT!

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    hdmac commented on Over it

    09-13-2009

    Capitalize your "i"s because it distracts the reader. Honest words though.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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