Band of Thunder

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    Poem Commentary

    the band of thunder is the herd in the poem.

    Band of Thunder

    The ground shakes with fear and power.
    As the day draws to a close, so does the hour.
    A band of arabians is on the horizon.
    The leader fears no capture from ranch horizon.
    As this herd thunders across the dessert,
    The Band of Thunder stampedes again.



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    BDIsernhagen commented on Band of Thunder

    06-05-2009

    this could so easlily be stretched out into many stanzas, but you kept it short...and that does something, it extends the poem longer than anyone could have written it. good read.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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