soft as a cloud
as this pain worsens,
the world begins to melt away.
i softly dissolve,
and become soft as a cloud.
soft as a cloud
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Tags: Lost Love
Poem Commentary
a poem i wrote. i am still trying to over a break up, and this is how i feel.
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RHPeat commented on soft as a cloud
12-19-2010
- Great poem; I really like the comparison between self and cloud/ A poet friend// RH Peat
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